Rummaging through my old comics collection I realized why this character felt so right to me; Warren Ellis'
Just a Pilgrim comic book fits it to a tee!
I like Indomitable even though it might be weird having an 11.30, "it's not quite midnight yet," but I can live with that. Deadly Reflexes should just be dropped though, I'm in agreement with Arvid on why. If you just like the flavor of the name of the move, Deadly Reflexes, than exchange it for I've Seen Such Things..., getting to roll+sharp when under fire could definitely be due to Deadly Reflexes. :)
In regards to Mike's Reveal the Secret Truth suggestion, I think that KreenWarrior's original Lead By Example does almost the same thing, but in a more fitting manner to how I see the Pilgrim character.
Based on the pilgrim in Just a Pilgrim, I'd love to add the following character move to the list.
Sharpshooter: when going aggro on a fucker at a far distance using some sort of rifle, roll+sharp instead.
Stats are too high, too. Vincent breaks them down here:
http://apocalypse-world.com/forums/index.php?topic=91.0
Johnstone is definitely right here, although Vincent isn't in the post that's cross-referenced. Please see my
Character Analysis PDF, which breaks down every stat line of each character (along with some other details).