Typos/spelling

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Typos/spelling
« on: September 02, 2014, 08:47:45 PM »
I don't know if I'll have a chance to playtest anytime soon, but I can pick nits at least!

Rights: Personal Prowess: exhilerating s/b exhilarating (also appears on Peasant Beauty playbook)

Battle Moves: Harrassingng Your Enemy

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lumpley

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Re: Typos/spelling
« Reply #1 on: September 03, 2014, 09:29:04 AM »
Thank you!

More always welcome, as you spot them.

-Vincent

Re: Typos/spelling
« Reply #2 on: September 03, 2014, 02:09:59 PM »
Household & Belongings / Personal Belongings / Plain: sunblreached

Re: Typos/spelling
« Reply #3 on: September 03, 2014, 02:21:17 PM »
But I love my sunblreached work tunic!

Re: Typos/spelling
« Reply #4 on: September 03, 2014, 08:49:20 PM »
Rights PDF

The Other World
"You have the right to call others to repentence" -> repentance

The Wider World
"You have the right to abandon your releationships" -> relationships
"You are descended from a local governer" -> governor
Under "You are descended from a general," war-captain is misspelled "war-captian"

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Sheets PDF

Stronghold, Improvement: "Lay up stores for a seige" -> siege

Household & Belongings
Household: typo depends on where you're writing. "Dependants" is the UK spelling of the word; standard US spelling is "dependents."
Personal Belongings (Accessories), again "woollen" is UK spelling, "woolen" is US spelling.
Arms & Armor, "legionaires" -> legionaries

Battle Moves
Harrassing Your Enemy: in addition to the extra "ng" already noted, "harrass" in general should be "harass"

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Instructions PDF

Peoples
Governor is misspelled "governer" twice in the opening paragraph.

Magics
Under the secret sanctum to God entry, "glipse" -> glimpse

Re: Typos/spelling
« Reply #5 on: September 19, 2014, 01:07:06 PM »
Not exactly a typo, and not sure if it's an error, but in the "you have the right to guidance and protection of your guardian soul" move, both the 10+ and the 7-9 result are "mark 2".