Barf Forth Apocalyptica
the swamp provides => AW:Dark Age => Topic started by: Borogove on September 02, 2014, 08:47:45 PM
-
I don't know if I'll have a chance to playtest anytime soon, but I can pick nits at least!
Rights: Personal Prowess: exhilerating s/b exhilarating (also appears on Peasant Beauty playbook)
Battle Moves: Harrassingng Your Enemy
-
Thank you!
More always welcome, as you spot them.
-Vincent
-
Household & Belongings / Personal Belongings / Plain: sunblreached
-
But I love my sunblreached work tunic!
-
Rights PDF
The Other World
"You have the right to call others to repentence" -> repentance
The Wider World
"You have the right to abandon your releationships" -> relationships
"You are descended from a local governer" -> governor
Under "You are descended from a general," war-captain is misspelled "war-captian"
-
Sheets PDF
Stronghold, Improvement: "Lay up stores for a seige" -> siege
Household & Belongings
Household: typo depends on where you're writing. "Dependants" is the UK spelling of the word; standard US spelling is "dependents."
Personal Belongings (Accessories), again "woollen" is UK spelling, "woolen" is US spelling.
Arms & Armor, "legionaires" -> legionaries
Battle Moves
Harrassing Your Enemy: in addition to the extra "ng" already noted, "harrass" in general should be "harass"
-
Instructions PDF
Peoples
Governor is misspelled "governer" twice in the opening paragraph.
Magics
Under the secret sanctum to God entry, "glipse" -> glimpse
-
Not exactly a typo, and not sure if it's an error, but in the "you have the right to guidance and protection of your guardian soul" move, both the 10+ and the 7-9 result are "mark 2".