Questers into the Unknown

Here is my humble modification, inspired by World of Dungeon (although I still retain the Dungeon World basic moves):

http://swordsofminaria.blogspot.ca/2012/08/questers-into-unknown.html

Any reactions?

Based purely on the layout alone, I love this.  Let me digest it, like a hapless adventurer in the stomach of a shoggoth, and I'll get back to you (like an unkillable elder entity from the beyond the stars).