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Apocalypse World / Re: New playbook: the Smiler
« on: January 12, 2012, 05:09:31 PM »I kind of like this! I think that you might want to consider the fact that the character is set up to be a dickweed to the other player characters. The normal assumption in AW is that 'We are currently allies at the beginning of play'. If your Hx rules state that two players know how much of a dickwad you are, it seems to subvert the normal assumption. Maybe you might want to consider providing an out for that.Reword the Hx options to be more positive, hmm?
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The character theme seems to be a generally deceptive character that also has some potential professionial gambler/cheater theme. However, because the professional gambler/cheater parts aren't super strong, I think it'd make more sense to have Card Shark be an optional move as opposed to required move.A valid point. Actually, if I am not mistaken, there was a strongly-weird playset about gambling-centered character, so moving it more to a background here might be a nice move.
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I'd change Sweet Lies to mirror Oftener Right/Insight/Eager To Know: If you give a character false information and they act on it, they take +1 forward, and if they fail at what they were attempting to do, they mark experience.What do you think about the version I posted in comments above?
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I think Sucker is Born Every Minute is kind of boring and leads to unnecessary +1 proliferation. Think of the gentle +1 ecosystem! To some degree, I think the people who see you coming should be the PCs, particularly the PC's with high Hx, and the interference rules already cover how that effects manipulating PCs.Dropping "The sucker..." might solve the hot advancement problem. The sex move would then use "Sweet lies", as you said. But I think it would be cool to have a betrayal-based move. How could it work?
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I think "I can explain" isn't worth the cost of a move as written. Maybe change it to a generalized "When you manipulate people to clean up your own mess, get Neat Thing"There was a nice move from Ewen Cluney's Dragon World which worked somewhat like that. Might be worth to hack it.