Typos

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Typos
« on: June 21, 2010, 09:59:04 AM »
Hey, I think Timothy Kleinert's name needs to have an "ert" not an "art" at the end, on pages 287 and 288.

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lumpley

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Re: Typos
« Reply #1 on: June 21, 2010, 10:30:45 AM »
Thanks, Gregor.

(Argh! I thought I checked that!)

-Vincent

Re: Typos
« Reply #2 on: June 21, 2010, 03:14:30 PM »
The first time Grief is mentioned on page 148, his name isn't capitalized.

Re: Typos
« Reply #3 on: June 21, 2010, 07:19:07 PM »
Page 6, end of second para: "From this, the world’s psychic maelstrom, we none of us have shelter."

Is that "we know that..." or just "...none of us have shelter."?

Page 7, under Brainer is a word that I don't understand: "accountrement". Is it "accoutrement" (a trapping)?

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lumpley

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Re: Typos
« Reply #4 on: June 21, 2010, 09:29:07 PM »
From an astute reader via email:

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p139 in Grotesques/Pain addict you have "impules" instead of "impulse"

Re: Typos
« Reply #5 on: June 22, 2010, 03:32:54 AM »
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The “you already know all there is to know” clause is there, but I’ve never used it and I hope you never do too.
That's an awkward turn of phrase, thought I'd point it out.

Re: Typos
« Reply #6 on: June 22, 2010, 09:10:07 AM »
Pg 15, Harm, 2nd para: "It the player" -> "If the player".

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lumpley

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Re: Typos
« Reply #7 on: June 22, 2010, 03:10:04 PM »
Another from email:

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pg 15 under Harm and Healing..

"*It* the player marks the segment 11:00 . . ."

Should be *if, *i'm guessing.

Re: Typos
« Reply #8 on: June 22, 2010, 04:00:24 PM »
Like I said above. ;)

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lumpley

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Re: Typos
« Reply #9 on: June 22, 2010, 04:11:14 PM »
Maybe I'll fix it twice, too. That'll teach it!

-Vincent

Re: Typos
« Reply #10 on: June 23, 2010, 08:18:26 AM »
On page 36, the Brainer Special refers to a "deep brain scan (p5)".  This is actually on page 34.  Presumably it's on page 5 of the mini booklet version of the Brainer.

Same thing with the Savvyhead Special on page 78.

And again on page 84 for the Skinner Special.

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lumpley

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Re: Typos
« Reply #11 on: June 23, 2010, 09:18:02 AM »
Another from email:
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on p84 a reference to p8 probably meant to say p83 for
Hypnotize.

-Vincent

Re: Typos
« Reply #12 on: June 23, 2010, 09:24:05 AM »
In the Maestro D' Hx section:
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On the others’ turns, choose your favorite character; ignore the
number that player tells you and write Hx+3 insted.
Seth Ben-Ezra
Great Wolf

Re: Typos
« Reply #13 on: June 23, 2010, 11:05:36 AM »
In the list of grotesque moves:

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Ruin something. Defoul, rot, desecrate, corrupt, adulter it.

should be Befoul

Re: Typos
« Reply #14 on: June 24, 2010, 04:26:19 PM »
p. 113

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Once you have the player’s answer, build on it. I mean three
things by that: (1) barf apocalyptica upon it, by adding detailsand
imagery of your own;

Note the "detailsand" missing a space. This makes the text hyphenate funny, FYI.
Seth Ben-Ezra
Great Wolf