Short Apocalypse World Story

Apologies if this isn't welcome, is in the wrong place, or is judged to be in bad taste. A while back I wrote a short bit of fiction, borrowing heavily from Apocalypse World. Thought I'd share it here.

http://www.writerscarnival.ca/scavenger-dogs-of-the-wasteland/

It would be kind of you to let me know what you think, and if it do offend, I'd be willing to take it down right swift.

I like it, good start and easy to follow characterisation. You should do more!

Hey, glad you enjoyed it.