Hello Filippo,
This looks like a really fascinating skin. It gives a character a brush with death that's different from the Ghost or the Ghoul--I like that. I shall list my thoughts and commentary below:
- Why is it called the Walker? I feel like there's some reference I'm not picking up on here.
- Does Is this pain or pleasure? give Conditions?
- Does What else you got? work if you're only being dealt one Harm? How does the move interact with The downward spiral?
- I'm not sure how I feel with a regular skin move interacting with a growing up move. Maybe change the wording so it doesn't reference the move by name?
- I like the supernatural ambiguity the moves provide.
- Could you maybe give an example of how another character could cure the Walker's death obsessed Condition? Also, "death obsessed" sounds a little clunky. One of the Ghoul moves mentions the Condition morbid, and Was there a light at the end? is kind of similar to Ending. Maybe go with "morbid" instead?
- I see dead people is really cool because I can think of all sorts of potential drama to generate from it.
- Is there a particular reason Thought I'd something more to say is an actual move and not part of the Walker's Backstory?
I believe that's everything. Once again, I think this skin is really neat and has a lot of cool potential and makes my completely human and normal pedipalps all a-chitter.