I find it interesting. It could maybe use some editing and polish in a few spots (I don't have time for a full review right now), but overall it is good.
One point of interest: if you wanted to make "deadly beauty" non-supernatural, you could always say the person is distracted and falls/trips/cuts themself accidentally. This is kind of humorous but also believable, and happens often in TV/movies/books...
I probably wouldn't put this in the move itself, but maybe in the how-to-play section.
- Alex