Yes, this is quite good.
If I may make one small criticism, however, I think the ages in general are too high. Too many people over 30, not enough 15-25 year-olds. Life is hard and cheap in Apocalypse World. Just like in the third world, probably half of all people everywhere are under 20. Unless you are going for a Children of Men vibe, in which case, I can't actually complain!