Oh, wow, Mease. That's great.
I wonder if you could make it even broader, though? Possibly making it resemble AW's go aggro a little more? For example:
When you force someone to do what you want, roll +Str. On a 7-9, they pick one. On a 10+, they pick two.
• they do it
• you inflict your damage
• they don't inflict their damage to you
...or something like that. Maybe you need more choices to make it more general?
Opens up other custom moves, too. "Sinister: when you make a verbal threat that you can clearly back up, you can force someone using +Cha instead of +Str." And for the "Grapple" special move: "when you force someone with your bare hands, your victim never inflicts damage on you.". (or "...your victim picks one extra choice.")