New Mystery - Eaten By The Rich

Hello, all! I've written my first Mystery for the system! Since this is my first Mystery, I'm more than open to any suggestions any of you may have, but I hope that it stands up pretty well as is. Please enjoy!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eZkmRGb-IUzLTOzc709aEEkJBDDdPdM3bYWa-Ws8wp8/edit