These are great, Joe.

One thing I wondered about the Witch: does the bolded lines around her left eye (*) make her look a little bit cross-eyed to anyone else?

(*) 'Left' to us looking at her; it'd be her right eye.

That's great to hear!

FYI: I'd estimate mid-November as the likely date for pulling a playtest together (given the scholarship application I need to write, some other editing and playtesting promises I need to keep, and a game of Apocalypse World to wrap up).

In another thread, mcdaldno asked what I'd need to run a playtest. Now I haven't read through this forum exhaustively, so I'll put up my list ... feel free to link me if the answers are around. And if you've got ideas about what you still need, put 'em down too.

Here's what I reckon I need to know:

+ Which playbooks are finished and ready to go?
+ Is there only one Mortal in the game? (Like, in Apocalypse World, only 1 person can choose each playbook.)
+ Are there Hx rules for the playbooks yet?
+ What are the Basic Moves for Monsterhearts?
+ Is there any particular advice for running the first session?
+ Are there advancement rules for the characters?
+ Are there special rules for establishing Fronts and Threats?

I'm in!