Its me again back with another sci-fi project.

This time I'm trying my hand at making a mini RPG. Coming in at 4 pages total, the game is about exploring the fantastic landscapes of a Huge mysterious mega space station. Think Ringworld, a Dyson sphere, or the citadel from mass effect. Its also about getting strange powers after being exposed to what you find.

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B6V1QEnf-U00VmdYMC0wWGRxY28

Check it out. Feel free to give me feedback or playtest if you like, and let me know how it went.

Quick question,

I have someone playing The Divine playbook for the first time and even though I've looked it over many times, I am curious why the Boss from beyond move isn't a given like with the Chosen's Destiny’s Plaything or the professional's Deal with the agency?

Thanks in advance.

Here is a question I'm not sure I've ever seen an answer to. Is there a particular order of moves on a playbook? I mean its not alphabetical. Is there thought that goes into which appears first or last? I'm not just asking for AW but any hacks people have made as well. Do you put them in any particular order?

Hello BFA forum,

Would it be cliche to start with "long time lurker, first time poster?" Well I just did it, so get over it.

Let's get started, I made a hack. I didn't start in the forum but I did find advice here, but I did it. And now after many, many months of work with the only person hearing about it (or caring about it) being my GF, I am ready for advice moving forward. And maybe soon even play-testing (cringe). But first some description.

What is it?
Ever wanted to travel to exciting, exotic planets, learn exciting skills. Meet exciting and exotic cultures and... do whatever, Well Planet of the week is for you. Heavily inspired by sci-fi TV tropes, characters and subjects matter. Play as your favorite gritty space traveling archetype, trying to make your way through a harsh universe in this hack inspired by alien, firefly, farscape, and yes even star trek.

In this exciting world you can be...
I made a LOT of classes, too many classes, here are a few:

Adept: Practitioner of mysterious Arts who is surprisingly deadly

Artificial: A manufactured being capable of inhuman feats

Doc: Keeping people alive is your business

Explorer: A well traveled experienced jack of all trades

Hired Gun: Enough said

Hacker: Master of computers and networks

Investigator: Obsession and Keen eyes for detail

Lowlife: Criminal, or at least criminally minded

Personality: Good at talking their way in or out of trouble

Pilot: enough said

Psychic: Someone with a mind that can reach new hidden depths

Survivor: Forged in on a harsh world tough as hell to kill

Techie: Drones, gadgets, and fixing things

Veteran: Scarred, seasoned, and capable

Also

The basic moves are reworked, and I separated out rules for vehicles and major assets not to mention made my own hx(ish) descriptions.

What I need

I have wanted to make a space/sci-fi game for years now, but was never able to do it from scratch. I seriously looked at so many options, started and abandoned adapting no less than three other systems to my purposes, until I came across Apocalypse world, and Monster of the week. I finally found a system that would general help rather than hinder the type of gaming I've always wanted. And boy did I run with it.

But I've never made a game before, and while I can guess on what to do next, I would appreciate any advice on moving forward. Not to mention just wanting to see some validation for all my work, that someone other than my GF and I seeing it. So thoughts, comments, advice?

Once I find a place to host it, (and maybe make some last minute edits) I will post what I have for critique. For now though ask me whatever your interested in and I shall provide!