I'm the player in timmyd's game.

I'd prefer it if the True Knight was a little more generic, replacing phrases such as "your divine authority" with "your authority".  Whether the source is divine or not would be up to the player.  I'm not saying to scrub it clean of divinity but save the divinity for higher levels and where completely necessary.

"Am I making a reasonable attempt to avoid violence?" might work for some but it implies a value that isn't true for my PC.  My PC wants to do glorious battles, not avoid violence.