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Monsterhearts / Re: New skin: The Host
« on: March 24, 2014, 05:51:39 PM »
Glad to offer feedback!

For the Sex Move, make it more clear that there are some consent issues involved here. I hadn't thought about it until you said it, but that implication is there and should be clear to the players (both the one choosing this skin, and those playing with it in their game in general). Maybe be more elaborate about it: If your Guest chose to have Sex with this person, roll to Hold Steady, etc. Maybe that can be the difference in moving one tick or two, depending on who's choice it was to have sex.

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Monsterhearts / Re: New skin: The Host
« on: March 14, 2014, 03:32:11 PM »
Very cool! Some thoughts I had while reading it:

Sex Move, why does failure move you two ticks while success only moves you one? Why not one and one?

Darkest Self: How it can be ended is sort of unclear. Just being physically stopped, that's all? It seems a little...uneven that a tall fence could potentially be all it takes to end one's Darkest Self. I'd go with something that more actively involves other players (as at least one potentially way to end it).

Moves: Some cool moves in here, but they feel like they could use more potential benefits of being in the Overwhelmed end of things. There are a few that benefit from being In Control, but unless I missed something (possible!), only stronger rolls in Strange Aptitude get a benefit there.

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