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powered by the apocalypse => Monsterhearts => Topic started by: neonchameleon on October 24, 2014, 06:27:40 PM

Title: New Skin: The Initiate
Post by: neonchameleon on October 24, 2014, 06:27:40 PM

I've got a new skin - currently in the first draft.  The Initiate started out life as an environmental activist - and ended up becoming someone with A Cause.  It's currently more religious than I'd intended I think; it's intended to cover more than that.  Currently in first functional draft state, and feedback is extremely welcome; I know it can be tightened further.  And broadened to get more of the environmentalism and politics the vision had in there.

The Initiate (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EebFV3lHDnL9w2gmnpW2mHHDkcRQkjbdkR53iwYUuPw/edit)

Title: Re: New Skin: The Initiate
Post by: neonchameleon on November 10, 2014, 10:32:27 AM

Now heavily revamped (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EebFV3lHDnL9w2gmnpW2mHHDkcRQkjbdkR53iwYUuPw/edit?hl=en&forcehl=1) to bring out the intended themes much better.