Barf Forth Apocalyptica
powered by the apocalypse => Monsterhearts => Topic started by: mcdaldno on October 28, 2010, 02:06:57 PM
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I was going to wait until I had the complete set and spring 'em all on you at once. But then I got way too impatient. Feedback Desired.
The Vampire:
(http://joepub.fileave.com/The%20Vampire.jpg)
The Witch:
(http://joepub.fileave.com/The%20Witch.jpg)
The Fae:
(http://joepub.fileave.com/The%20Fae%20Boy.jpg)
That the Fae is a shirtless Asian boy delights me.
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These are great!!
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The Werewolf
(http://joepub.fileave.com/The%20Werewolf.jpg)
This one's got a lot more black than the others... issue?
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These are great, Joe.
One thing I wondered about the Witch: does the bolded lines around her left eye (*) make her look a little bit cross-eyed to anyone else?
(*) 'Left' to us looking at her; it'd be her right eye.
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The Ghoul, a first attempt:
(http://joepub.fileave.com/The%20Ghoul.jpg)
Harper suggested that background - the ghoul is about hunger, and often a hunger for flesh... and he's dead and cold... so a track of meat packing hooks.
Does that connection make sense to y'all? Does this say "ghoul" to you?
I mean, it's sweet... but I'm still debating whether it's right.
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These are great, Joe.
One thing I wondered about the Witch: does the bolded lines around her left eye (*) make her look a little bit cross-eyed to anyone else?
(*) 'Left' to us looking at her; it'd be her right eye.
Hm. I hadn't seen it until you pointed it out.
To me, it looks like she's looking left. Her left.
I'll poll some people. It could be just as simple and dotting in her eye, or adding a white fleck into her other eye.
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I think the ghoul is great. In fact I think they're all pretty awesome.
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These are pretty dope. Especially the witch. Damn.