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powered by the apocalypse => Monster of the Week => Topic started by: John B. on July 30, 2012, 11:19:26 PM

Title: Playbooks I'd like to see (and that I'll pay for with other playbooks...)
Post by: John B. on July 30, 2012, 11:19:26 PM
So I have all of the extra playbooks for MotW that I'm aware of (except the Exile, and I'll submit a AP report of MotW when I get a chance to get that from Mike).

That's gotten me thinking about new playbooks that I'd like to see. The problem is that while I would normally love the challenge of making them myself, the sad fact is that with a recent job change, five kids, and a talent for procrastination, I know that I won't finish any of them anytime soon.

So, here's the deal: I will give any playbook I have in trade to anyone who creates a new playbook (either based on one of the below ideas or else another idea of your choosing), then posts it for discussion on this forum, and then makes revisions based on the feedback they get. Send me a write-up of the playbook (after at least one round of forum feedback and revision) and let me know which playbook you want in exchange.

Here are some playbooks I'd particularly like to see:

Anyway, if no one's interested, I'll eventually try to get around to making one or more of the above. But if someone would consider taking a crack at one of these (or any other playbook that interests you), I'd love to bribe you with playbook(s).

-John B.
Title: Re: Playbooks I'd like to see (and that I'll pay for with other playbooks...)
Post by: Mike Sands on July 30, 2012, 11:24:20 PM
I also look forward to some of those being written! Great ideas, John.
Title: Re: Playbooks I'd like to see (and that I'll pay for with other playbooks...)
Post by: lost_zeppo on December 05, 2012, 08:27:57 AM
I think I'm gonna take a crack at doing the Fugitive. I need an extra creative project to busy myself with over Christmas, so I'll see about putting a playbook together for that. :)
Title: Re: Playbooks I'd like to see (and that I'll pay for with other playbooks...)
Post by: John B. on December 05, 2012, 04:47:33 PM
That sounds great! I can't wait to see what you come up with.

-John B.
Title: Re: Playbooks I'd like to see (and that I'll pay for with other playbooks...)
Post by: HyveMynd on January 08, 2013, 02:25:32 AM
Your initial idea for The Escaped really caught my attention, John B. It makes me think of the protagonists from Changeling: the Lost game; ordinary humans who were captured or lured into the Fae Realms, kept as pets/slaves/objects/servants/lovers by an inhuman Fae Keeper for an unknown length of time, and then finally were freed/cast out/escaped back into the real world only to find they'd been changed by the experience. Some try to get back, some merely try to avoid their Keeper, while others actively hunt them down. It's my favorite of the White Wolf nWoD games.

So, even though I too have the equivalent of a Masters Degree in procrastination, I'll give this thing a try. I love tinkering around with AW game playbooks, and who knows. Maybe I'll actually finish this one. :)
Title: Re: Playbooks I'd like to see (and that I'll pay for with other playbooks...)
Post by: Handsome Dan on February 13, 2013, 01:53:02 AM
Hi there, new guy here. I'll save the introduction for a more proper thread but suffice to say I've been lurking here for a couple weeks and I diddled up a draft for The Fugitive. I'm still getting the hang of how things work and this was more of a 20 minute draft that went a little more towards the serial killer part and less the "serial killer of MONSTERS" part.

I'll try to get a more proper draft up tomorrow as I've got a buddy willing to playtest it during a one-shot I intend to run this weekend. I realized a little too late into making it that you can't really stat-harm an enemy (such as reducing their effective Cool stat), but I'm looking into greater source material and this seems like a fun project to jump into.

The Fugitive:
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B2FvNUzDAgTwcVRJeXM1OU1ycW8/edit?usp=sharing

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Once I figure this out and fix it all up I'd love to take a crack at either The Risen or the Escaped. The Freak seems like too much of a carryover with The Monstrous or the Summoned, but I like the angle of discovering ones origins/purpose for creation. Maybe it's just the Abe Sapien comparison that threw me off, as it feels more like a Roger than an Abe issue. Though I haven't looked at those comics in a long while, so I might be way off base.

Hope it's a decent enough framework, I'll get back to you with something better as soon as humanly possible.
Title: Re: Playbooks I'd like to see (and that I'll pay for with other playbooks...)
Post by: Mike Sands on February 13, 2013, 02:13:16 AM
a draft for The Fugitive. I'm still getting the hang of how things work and this was more of a 20 minute draft that went a little more towards the serial killer part and less the "serial killer of MONSTERS" part.

Hm. Looks pretty good.

I have reservations about in the news + on the run - they are a little complicated, and it might be easier to combine them into one move/background. There's also no reason for why this character is a monster hunter rather than just a psycho, and I think that needs to be included.

Perhaps have a section where the player decides what crimes they are suspected of, and then an "on the run" move that:
- gives +1 when you manipulate with the threat of violence, or -1 otherwise
- gives you +1 hold when interrogating people to investigate a mystery
- cops and journalists will usually recognise you

I really like "hold out shank", that's going to be good fun.

I'd make "throat cutter" less like the expert move. A straight +2 harm on normal folks would be plenty - I don't see hunters fighting normal folk very often anyway, and I don't see the roll leading to anything cooler than the fugitive trying to explain why people keep dying around him.

For reducing cool on NPCs, you could include a move that does something like "Another hunter loses 1-Cool until they shake the effect, bystanders will freak out."
Title: Re: Playbooks I'd like to see (and that I'll pay for with other playbooks...)
Post by: Handsome Dan on February 13, 2013, 05:56:50 PM
Took your comments and second-drafted it. Aimed for less Slasher Movie and more towards Wronged (but it's your own damn fault in a way). More of a criminality/self-destructive play style to the Fugitive.

https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B2FvNUzDAgTwV3R0Zkk2bktkdmc/edit?usp=sharing

General thoughts?