Barf Forth Apocalyptica
powered by the apocalypse => Monsterhearts => Topic started by: gaigaia on July 17, 2012, 03:29:09 PM
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Here it is:
https://docs.google.com/open?id=0B47DgdQMaNxiaVd1ZHZfZkJUVzQ
This is the last that my group demanded me to do. They are asking for a few more and I might do them in due time. Right now, that's enough.
I like the like joke in the Nymph's eyes choice, 'green eyes', just like the chosen can choose 'blue eyes'. I find it funny.
One thing, the Nymph is Happy. That's quite interesting. And I find it cool that her sex move gives the Happy condition. Maybe it should make people act on advantage? I don't know. I find it funny.
Also, the nymph is amazing with the Unashamed and The Wild Hunt fae's moves. She can easily get +5 on her Turn someone on roll.
What do you all think?
the image link:
http://lillyxandra.deviantart.com/art/Lily-Nymph-253330004?q=boost%3Apopular%20nymph&qo=19
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I find it interesting. It could maybe use some editing and polish in a few spots (I don't have time for a full review right now), but overall it is good.
One point of interest: if you wanted to make "deadly beauty" non-supernatural, you could always say the person is distracted and falls/trips/cuts themself accidentally. This is kind of humorous but also believable, and happens often in TV/movies/books...
I probably wouldn't put this in the move itself, but maybe in the how-to-play section.
- Alex